Music Magazine: What did they think?

For one of our tasks we had to "interrogate" a couple of people from our specific target audience on camera, and ask them what they initially thought of all aspects of my music magazine, and see what could be improved overall. From this video I took away that I needed to add more pictures where appropriate to fill the blank spaces, that I could include some sort of information about the artist 'The Dashing Racqueteers' on my double page spread, and to include more text in certain places on my magazine. I will definitely take these into account, and when working on the magazine in the next few weeks I will be sure to make improvements from the feedback I've got today.